Welcome to StoryFeedback.com

If you write short stories and you would like constructive feedback on your work...

...we can help!

Starting at just £5 GB ($10 US) for a piece of up to 2000 words, we will...

• Rate each of the main elements of your story
  
• Make suggestions for improvement
  
• List any grammatical or spelling errors
  
• Optionally publish your story on StoryFeedback.com so that visitors can provide feedback too

...thus increasing your chances of publication.

To find out just how good our service is take a look at an example of a critique here. And Candra Hope said this about the critique we provided for her story Monster: "Thanks for the critique. It's really in depth and helpful. You've pointed out both the weak points and the strong ones. I can see now where I'm going wrong and what needs fixing. I know what you mean about it needing fleshing out..."

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So what are you waiting for?

Click the relevant button below to pay for your critique securely via PayPal and then upload your story from the online form that should appear, or use our printable order form here.

Your critique can be emailed to you as a PDF file or posted to you in print form.

Story up to 2000 words:

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Story up to 3000 words:
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Story up to 4000 words:

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